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Brazil flagLuana Teixeira
Writing exercise If anyone can correct, thank you: Are she happy with her job ? Are she motivated to advanced in it ? She is happy with her job and she would like to advance her carrer, but sometimes, she is not sure about this. Because today she is working few hours per week. Financially is enought, but she has no ways to save monay, so will be great for her to work longer hours and earn more. But, by the other side, at her free time she is studing and improves another skills in anothers directions. They will not be used to advance in her actual carrer, but they could be useful to a big change in the direction of her life. In fact, she does not know exactelly what she want at this moment.

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Hi Luana!

Here is my correction:

Is she happy with her job ? Is she motivated to advance in it ?

She is happy with her job and she would like to advance her career, but sometimes she is not sure about this. **Because today she works only a few hours per week. Financially it’s enough, but she has no way to save money, so it would be great for her to work longer hours and earn more. But, on the other hand, in her free time she is studying and improving her skills in other areas. They will not be used to advance in her actual career, but they could be useful if she experiences a big change in the direction of her life. In fact, she does not know exactly what she wants at this moment.


**This sentence sounds incomplete. It might be better if you delete “because”.

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