Topic 3: house
I am living in a house with three bed rooms. I always hold the belief that it’s lovely to experience living with some kindly roommates. Consequently, I prefer living in a house than a accommodation.
There are two young men live with me. One is a school lecturer, and another one is a fresh graduate who is preparing for the Postgraduate Qualifying Examination. They are at my age and have some same interests and hobbies with me, so there are full of harmony atmosphere in our daily life. We are all fond of delicious cuisine and indoor sports, thus, we get along pretty well. We can watch TV shows and sitcoms in the living room and making healthy meals in the kitchen, rather than ordering a takeaway!
I’ve been living there since I graduated and move out from the University accommodation, it has been two full years. The more time I spend there, the more comfortable my house feels like to me. Although there would never be as same as home. I spend most of my time cooking in the kitchen as it is my favorite part of my house. I am quite passionate about food and love to cook, so I’d like to spend lots of time in kitchen learning new recipes and skills. I always have a very enjoyable time when I am in that room.
The transport facilities in my area are not bad. The entire city has access to a fair reliable network of bus and metro services. My favorite form of transportation is the tube as it is much quicker than the bus and there is no chance of getting stuck in bumper-to-bumper traffic.
In spite of the fact that I’m really satisfied with this house, I do not plan to live here for a long time. Because I am looking forward to traveling abroad and pursue further study. In that case, I will leave there and find new places to live.
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Topic 3: house
I am living in a house with three bedrooms. I always hold the belief that it’s lovely nice to experience living with some kindly roommates. Consequently Because of this, I prefer living in a house than an accommodation apartment? (I'm not entirely sure what you mean by accomodation).
There are two young men that live with me. One is a school lecturer, and the other another one is a fresh graduate who is preparing for the his Postgraduate Qualifying Examination. They are at my age and have some same similar interests and hobbies with to me, so there are full of harmony atmosphere in our daily life we get along well. We are all fond of delicious cuisine food and indoor sports., thus, we get along pretty well. We can watch TV shows and sitcoms in the living room and making make healthy meals in the kitchen, rather than ordering a takeaway!
I’ve been living there since I graduated and moved out from the University accommodation two years ago, it has been two full years. Although it would never be the same as home, the more time I spend there, the more comfortable my house feels like to me. although there it would never be as the same as home. I spend most of my time cooking in the kitchen as it is my favorite part of my house. I am quite passionate about food and love to cook, so I’d like to spend lots of time in the kitchen learning new recipes and skills. I always have a very enjoyable time when I am in that room.
The transport facilities in my area are not bad. The entire city has access to a fairly reliable network of bus and metro services. My favorite form of transportation is the tube as it is much quicker than the bus and there is no chance of getting stuck in bumper-to-bumper traffic.
In spite of the fact that I’m really satisfied with this house, I do not plan to live here for a long time. This is because I am looking forward to traveling abroad and pursue further study. In that case, I will leave there and find new places to live.
Good work!
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This was really good. Im going to make some suggestions so it sounds more natural to an American. You can see that you have a wide range of vocabulary but mix in a little British as well. You have the usage right gramatically for 90%, so again, these changes will be just what makes the sentence "sound" right to an American ear.
Topic 3: house
I am living in a house with three bed rooms. I always hold the belief that it’s lovely to experience living with some kindly roommates. Consequently, I prefer living in a house than a accommodation.
(( I am living in a house with three bed rooms. I've always held the belief that it would be nice to live with kind roommates. I do prefer to live in a house than in an accommodation i dont know what you mean here. Do you mean you prefer to live on your own instead of being somebodies guest?)) ((ahh! You mean the housing at your University! We would say 'Dormitory' or, more commonly, "Dorm" for short.))
There are two young men live with me. One is a school lecturer, and another one is a fresh graduate who is preparing for the Postgraduate Qualifying Examination. They are at my age and have some same interests and hobbies with me, so there are full of harmony atmosphere in our daily life. We are all fond of delicious cuisine and indoor sports, thus, we get along pretty well. We can watch TV shows and sitcoms in the living room and making healthy meals in the kitchen, rather than ordering a takeaway!
(( There are two young men who live with me. The first is a school lecturer and the other is a recent graduate preparing for the Postgraduate Qualifying Exam. They are both the same age as me and we all have similar interests and hobbies, creating a harmonious atmosphere at home. We are all fond of sampling delicious cuisines and playing indoor sports, so, we get along pretty well. We watch TV in the living room and prefer making healthy meals in the kitchen as opposed to ordering carry-out. sitcom is a type of TV show. It's not correct to list both. ))
I’ve been living there since I graduated and move out from the University accommodation, it has been two full years. The more time I spend there, the more comfortable my house feels like to me. Although there would never be as same as home. I spend most of my time cooking in the kitchen as it is my favorite part of my house. I am quite passionate about food and love to cook, so I’d like to spend lots of time in kitchen learning new recipes and skills. I always have a very enjoyable time when I am in that room.
((I've been living here since I graduated and moved out of the University's dormitory two years ago. The more time I spend here, the more comfortable I feel, although it will never be the same as being back home. I spend most of my time cooking in the kitchen which is my favorite part of the house. I am very passionate about food and love to cook, so I'd like to learn new recipes and sharpen my skills! I always enjoy myself in the kitchen!))
The transport facilities in my area are not bad. The entire city has access to a fair reliable network of bus and metro services. My favorite form of transportation is the tube as it is much quicker than the bus and there is no chance of getting stuck in bumper-to-bumper traffic.
((The public transportation in my area is not bad. The entire city has access to a fairly reliable network of bus and metro services. The metro (or Subway) is my favorite since it's much faster than the bus and there's no chance of getting caught in traffic.))
In spite of the fact that I’m really satisfied with this house, I do not plan to live here for a long time. Because I am looking forward to traveling abroad and pursue further study. In that case, I will leave there and find new places to live.
(( Though I'm really satisfied with this house, I don't plan on living here for much longer. I'm actually planning on travelling abroad and continuing my studies. When that happens, I will leave here and find new places to live.))
Again, all-in-all this was really great. I don't know if you were writing this specifically for a British reader, but since you didn't specify I hope this American perspective helps. :)
keep it up!
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