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He usually eats a ham sandwich for breakfast, potatoes with salad for lunch or soup and some bread for dinner. He likes grazing something sweet after lunch.
Potatoes are his favourite kind of vegetables.
He likes strawberries and oranges the most of all fruit.
He drinks still water most often.
He has a three-bedroom flat. There is a long corridor in the center of the flat. On the left, there is a small bedroom where he sleeps and kitchen. On the right, there are two bigger ones. In one of them there is a living room where he watches TV and invites friends. In the next one, there is study where he works.
He usually goes to work by car or by train.
He lives in a town. It's a nice, quiet area. There is a park there where he likes resting. There is a clinick, chemist's near hear. There are a lot of shops. Everywhere is close.
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He usually eats a ham sandwich for breakfast, potatoes with salad(I wonder if you mean 'potato salad') for lunch or (and,) soup and some bread for dinner. He likes grazing (on) something sweet after lunch.
Potatoes are his favourite(favourite = UK English, 'favorite' = US English)kind of vegetables(potatoes are not a 'kind' of vegetable. They are a root vegetable. They are usually referred to as a "starch". So we can say "Potatoes are his favorite starch" or "Root vegetables are his favorite kind of vegetable").
He likes strawberries and oranges the most of all fruit.(Recommend: "Strawberries and oranges are his favorite fruits.")
He drinks still water most often.
He has a three-bedroom flat. There is a long corridor in the center of the flat. On the left, there is a small bedroom where he sleeps and (the) kitchen. On the right, there are two bigger ones. In one of them there is a living room(the living room is not considered a bedroom) where he watches TV and invites friends. In the next one, there is (a) study(,) where he works.
He usually goes to work by car or by train.
He lives in a town. It's a nice, quiet area. There is a park there where he likes resting. There is a clinick(clinic), chemist's near hear.(I think you mean 'There is a clinic and pharmacy nearby.') There are a lot of shops. Everywhere(Maybe you mean 'Everything')is close.
Overall well done. Keep your sentences simple and keep practicing and you will become a strong writer in English. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.
-Jeff
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Thank you Amber!
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He usually eats a ham sandwich for breakfast, potatoes with salad for lunch[,] or soup and some bread for dinner.
He likes grazing ["has" instead] something sweet after lunch. ["gaze" usually means eats grass]
Potatoes are his favourite kind of vegetables. [correct]
He likes strawberries and oranges the most of all fruit. ["the most of all fruit" unclear] [instead just 'most of all"]
He drinks still water most often. [unclear is "still" mean "still water"]
He has a three-bedroom flat. There is a long corridor in the center of the flat. On the left, there is a small bedroom where he sleeps and [there is the[ kitchen. Is the kitchen also on the left?] On the right, there are two bigger ones ["ones"? or do you mean "rooms"?]. In one of them there is a living room where he watches TV and invites friends. In the next one, there is study where he works.
He usually goes to work by car or by train. [second "by" not necessary]
He lives in a town. It's a nice, quiet area. There is a park there [take out "there] where he likes resting. There is a clinick [clinic], chemist's near hear [instead "here". "Hear refers to the ear function]. There are a lot of shops. Everywhere is close.
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