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Is 26 too late to start over in a new career? (my answer to a guy aged 26)
When you’re over 30 it seems to you that 26 is a young age. In that age everything is possible, not only changing careers. In my opinion you should have no doubts about changing your job in any age. Our job is a significant part of our life and it’s very important to enjoy doing it! If you feel that you are becoming unsatisfied with your current work and the time to take up something new is now - do it! It’s always hard to start over in something but who hesitates is lost. Do you think that it’s better to run in place and then to feel bad about it for the rest of your life? Any job is not worth your health! If it takes a toll on you and you have the lack of sleep - screw it! We live in the world of vast opportunities! No need to have a bachelor’s or master’s degree or even to work a full-time, you can find a job after your heart. Nowadays you can google everything and get your any question answered. Anyway you can enroll in some offline courses or sign up for online classes to improve certain skills. The main thing is to start moving right now. Don’t put off!
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Correct my mistakes, please (if you have time)
Is 26 too late to start over in(with) a new career? (my answer to a guy aged 26)
When you’re over 30 it seems to you that 26 is a young age. In(At) that age everything is possible, not only changing careers. In my opinion you should have no doubts about changing your job in(at) any age. Our job is a significant part of our life and(,) it’s very important to enjoy doing it! If you feel that you are becoming unsatisfied with your current work and the(it's) time to take up something new is now - do it! It’s always hard to start over in(at) something(,) but (he) who hesitates is lost. Do you think that it’s better to run in place and then to feel bad about it for the rest of your life? Any(No) job is not worth your health! If it takes a toll on you and you have the(a) lack of sleep - screw it! We live in the world of vast opportunities! No need to have a bachelor’s or master’s degree or even to work a full-time, you can find a job after(by following) your heart. Nowadays you can google everything and get your(have) any question answered. Anyway you can enroll in some offline courses or sign up for online classes to improve certain skills. The main thing is to start moving right now. Don’t put (it) off!
Inspiring passage here. I totally agree! Never accept current circumstances as the only possible reality. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.
-Jeff
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This is a really great composition and very much how a native speaker would compose the expressions you have used. The writing is concise, clear and engaging. We generally save the expression "screw it" for the playwriters and "cynicals." This writing is inspirational. There's a few typos that someone with a laptop will correct. Bravo!
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