new school

I go to new school to teach this year->I will go to a new school this year to teach.

In fact i don't like to teach in a new school.

I hoped that i can return to the original school very much.-> I was really hoping that I can still return to my former school.

I have to adapt to new environment and rules.-> I have to adapt to a new environment and I need to familairze myself with the new rules and obey them.

I am tired and sad.

But i can change any thing.-> But I can`t change anything.

So sad.

New School 1

I go to new school am going to teach at a new school this year. In fact I 2 don't like to teach in new school here and would very much like to  . I hoped that i can return to the original school very much old place. I have to adapt to 3 New environment and rules that I have to adapt. I am tired and sad. But I can cannot change any thing anything now. So sad.

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2.   我 = I not i.  No exception.

3.  It is not incorrect but you are using too many sentences with the same structure, I this I that.  To write a good essay, use as much variations as possible to avoid dullness.

New School

I am going to join a new school to teach this year. In fact, I don't like to teach in a new school. I hope that I can return to the original school. I have to adapt to new environment and rules and it is not easy to do.I don't think that I can change any thing. I am so tired and sad too.