A Watch Battery
Could you correct my sentences? Yesterday, my watch battery died. I went to an electric shop to replace the battery. It cost ten thousand yen. It’s about ten dollars. How much does it cost to change a watch battery in your area?
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A Watch Battery
Could you correct my sentences? Yesterday, my watch battery died. I went to an electric shop to replace the battery. It cost ten thousand yen. It’s about ten dollars. How much does it cost to change a watch battery in your area?
There are no grammatical flaws. 文法は正しい！
electric shop > electronics store
To sound more fluent, i would write it like; あたしにとってはこんな風に書く
"Yesterday, my watches battery died, so i went to an electronics store to replace it. it cost me ten thousand yen, which is about ten dollars. how much does it cost where you live?"
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