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How I Discovered Italki
I really hope that I can improve my English especially my speaking skill. I have no good opportunity don't have any opportunities to speak English in my life. I always talk with my friends and family in Japanese. Sometimes I talk with my friends in English but when I speak English, I cannnot say what I want to say well. So I asked my teacher how I can improve my speaking skill. He said I could Skype but I had had only Japanese friends on Skype. Then he recommended Italki! :) I was very excited!!!
It has been about for 1 week since I have had Italki. Now I have some friends who speak English, French, Chinese, and so on, on Italki. I am super happy!! And I will improve my English through Italki!
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Guide: Red=訂正|Blue=推敲|Yellow=わかり難い|Green=意見
How I Found italki
I really hope that I to improve my English, especially, my speaking skills. I have no real opportunity to speak English in my daily life. I always talk with my friends, and family in Japanese, although sometimes I talk with my friends in English. When I speak English, I cannot say what I want to say well. So I asked my teacher how I could improve my speaking skills. He said I could use Skype, but I had had only Japanese friends on Skype. So he recommended italki! :) I was very excited!!!
It has been about for one week now that I have been on italki. Now I have some friends who speak English, French, Chinese, and other languages on Italki. I am super happy!! And I will surely improve my English through italki!
Welcome!
I just cleaned up some grammar issues - feel free to ask about anything that is not clear. The interesting thing is that in modern English, website names are not usually capitalised.
How I Know Found Italki
I really hope that I improve my English—especially my speaking skill. I don't have no good many opportunities to speak English in my life (1). I always talk with my friends, and family in Japanese. Sometimes I talk with my friends in English. When I speak English, I cannnot say what I want to say well. So I asked my teacher how I can could improve my speaking skill (2). He said I could Skype, but I had had only had Japanese friends in on Skype. So he recommended Italki! :) I was very excited!!!
It is about for 1 week that I have had Italki I've used italki for about 1 week. Now I have some friends who speak English, French, Chinese, and so on in Italki (3). I am super happy!! And I will improve my English through Italki!
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1. A better way to phrase that sentence would be, "I don't have many opportunities to speak English day to day."
2. the verb "asked" is past tense, but you used "can" which is present tense. So i changed it to "could.
3. The only incorrect thing is this sentence is the "in italki". It should be "on italki". But that makes the end of the sentence kind of unnatural and confusing "and so on on italki". So instead you may want to rephrase the sentence this way, "Now I have friends who speak English, French, Chinese, etc. on italki."y
Good work! Just a few grammar issues.
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