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Please help correct my English: A busy day today I was anxious last night and couldn't fall into sleep until 2 a.m. this morning. I woke up around 7:30 a.m.. My son finished his breakfast and walked to school himself. I decided to use the morning hours to write a summary for this semester's scratch class which I teach as an Enrichment program teacher at my son's primary school. It took me about two hours. Around 10 a.m. , I audio chatted with a friend via Wechat(the Chinese version of WhatApp but more powerful). She is a new coach and just worked with her first client yesterday. She told me some details of that coaching session. It was amazing! She totally has the talent of being a coach. She mentioned a very helpful 2-day workshop she attended and I asked about the information. Hopefully I will have time to participate that workshop next time in September. Afterwards I had lunch with a friend discussing the plan for our children in summer vacation. There was a lecture about mindfulness this afternoon near my apartment from 2 p.m. to 5 p.m. I went to that place. It was interesting and enlightening. However I didn't have enough time to finish it. I left the lecture around 3:20 p.m. and taught the scratch class until 5:30 p.m..

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Please help correct my English: A busy day today

I was anxious last night and couldn't fall into asleep until 2 a.m. this morning. I woke up around 7:30 a.m.. My son finished his breakfast and walked to school himself.

I decided to use the morning hours to write a summary for this semester's scratch class which I teach as an Enrichment Program teacher at my son's primary school. It took me about two hours.

Around 10 a.m. , I audio chatted with a friend via Wechat (the Chinese version of WhatApp but more powerful). She is a new coach and just worked with her first client yesterday. She told me some details of that coaching session. It was amazing! She is a very talented coach. totally has the talent of being a coach. She mentioned a very helpful 2-day workshop she attended and I asked her about it. about the information. Hopefully I will have time to participate in that next workshop next time in September.

Afterwards I had lunch with a friend, we discussed discussing the plan for our children during the in summer vacation.

There was a lecture about mindfulness this afternoon near my apartment from 2 p.m. to 5 p.m. I went to that place. and it was interesting and enlightening. However I didn't have enough time to stay to the end. finish it.

I left the lecture around 3:20 p.m. and taught the scratch class until 5:30 p.m..
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Please help correct my English: A busy day today

I was anxious last night and couldn't fall asleep until 2 a.m. this morning. (you don't really need to say "in the morning"if you already said at 2.a.m.)I woke up around 7:30 a.m. My son finished his breakfast and walked to school himself.

I decided to use the morning hours to write a summary for this semester's scratch class which I teach as an Enrichment program teacher at my son's primary school. It took me about two hours.

Around 10 a.m., I audio chatted with a friend via Wechat (the Chinese version of WhatsApp but more advanced). She is a new coach and just worked with her first client yesterday. She told me some details of that coaching session. It was amazing! She totally has the talent for being a coach. She mentioned a very helpful 2-day workshop she attended and I asked her about it (I asked for information about it). Hopefully, I will have time to participate in that workshop next time in September.

Afterwards, I had lunch with a friend discussing the plan for our children during the summer vacation.

There was a lecture about mindfulness this afternoon near my apartment from 2 p.m. to 5 p.m. I went there. (you can say "I went to that place" but I would mention exactly what kind of a place the lecture being held at in that case) It was interesting and enlightening. However, I didn't have enough time to finish it.

I left the lecture around 3:20 p.m. and taught the scratch class until 5:30 p.m.

Great job! You didn't really make any major mistakes here.
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I was anxious last night and couldn't fall into asleep until 2 a.m. this morning. I woke up around 7:30 a.m.. My son finished his breakfast and walked to school himself.

I decided to use the morning hours to write a summary for this semester's scratch class which I teach as an Enrichment program teacher at my son's primary school. It took me about two hours.

Around 10 a.m. , I audio chatted with a friend via Wechat(the Chinese version of WhatApp but more powerful). She is a new coach and just worked with her first client yesterday. She told me some details of that coaching session. It was amazing! She totally has the talent of being a coach. She mentioned a very helpful 2-day workshop she attended and I asked about the information. Hopefully I will have time to participate that workshop next time in September.

Afterwards I had lunch with a friend to discussing the plan for our children in during summer vacation.

There was a lecture about mindfulness this afternoon near my apartment from 2 p.m. to 5 p.m. I went to that lecture place. It was interesting and enlightening. However I didn't have enough time to finish it.

I left the lecture around 3:20 p.m. and taught the scratch class until 5:30 p.m.

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