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There is a well-known saying, “Home is where
the heart is.” This is especially true for me, as I come from a large family consisting
of my parents and five siblings. We all have not only managed to maintain our close
relationships with one another, but also managed to maintain living nearby each other here in Iran.
In fact, I have no relatives living abroad, my entire family lives here, and all of our properties, are located in Iran. I have lived my entire life with my parents in their house, so under those circumstances, leaving them for any length of time, let alone, a couple of years, would be somewhat hard to do. I love my city, and despite it being a small town, for me, it is a beautiful place and a wonderful city to live in.
Moreover, I already have a lucrative job offer from the nearby Burn and Wound Healing Research center, which is part of The Shiraz University of Medical Science, and a place where I have been working at for approx. 4 years. In addition, since I know that I can work here on my own, as a physiotherapist, I would never do anything to jeopardize these opportunities after graduation. Therefore, since my life now, is a complete and a happy one, under no circumstances, can I ever envision changing it!*
Hi, Bizhan. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. Sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. J.
*I am not sure that I made it more "formal", but I tried! (*-^)
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