我今天做得太多事了

我想也许我今天做得太多事了。一大早，我就清早走着去邮局，一路上我走了大约二十分钟才到。接近中午时早上晚些时候，我的卫生纸用完了需要去买东西，所以我得再需要走出去买走路。在下午，我尝试着了一点休息了一会儿，我只是坐着看电视和跟我的邻居一起看电视、喝茶。
I think I might have done a bit too much today. I walked to the Post Office early in the morning. Later on in the morning I needed to go shopping, so I had to go out walking again. In the afternoon I tried to rest a little. I just sat watching telly and drinking tea with my neighbour. 

今晚晚上，我做了一桌个很简单的饭菜，我现在正坐着一边看电视一边写中文，我还是坐着呀！我不累，我得做些某事，不然就太我这么无聊了！不过尽管如此，现在，刚刚我肚子疼，我吃过了止疼药了。
Tonight I cooked a simple meal and now I am watching telly and writing Chinese, I'm still sitting down! I'm not tired, I have to do something, I'm so bored! Still. my stomach hurts now, I've taken some painkillers. 

我知道我今天一定做得太多事了，但是如果我不去邮局，如果我不去买东西，有谁会去呢？！妹妹住得离我很远，妈妈总是很忙。这只是一个小手术，我不能宠坏溺爱自己，生活还要继续。然而我更担心手术两天之后，我的肚子仍然还很胖，一想到这儿我就想哭, 我不喜欢胖，哈哈！
I know I have done too much today，but if I dont go to the post Office, if I dont go shopping, who will?! My sisters lives a long way from me, my mum is always busy. It's just a small operation, I cant mollycoddle myself, life must go on! I'm more worried about the fact two days after my operation, my stomach is still fat, I just want to cry, I don't like being fat lol!

我今天做得有点太多了

我想也许我今天做事情得有点太多了。我清早走着去邮局，我走了大约二十分钟。早上晚些上午的时候，我需要去买东西，所以我再还是需要出去走路走路出去。 在到了下午，我尝试了着一点休息了一下，我只是坐着看电视和跟我的邻居喝茶（就是坐着看看电视或者跟我邻居聊聊天什么的）。

I think I might have done a bit too much today. I walked to the Post Office early in the morning. Later on in the morning I needed to go shopping, so I had to go out walking again. In the afternoon I tried to rest a little. I just sat watching telly and drinking tea with my neighbour.

今晚上我做了一个顿很简单的饭。我现在我一边看电视一边写中文。我（发现）还是坐着呀！我不累，我得做某事，我这么好无聊啊！尽管如此，但是现在， 我开始肚子疼了，于是我吃了止疼药。
Tonight I cooked a simple meal and now I am watching telly and writing Chinese, I'm still sitting down! I'm not tired, I have to do something, I'm so bored! Still. my stomach hurts now, I've taken some painkillers.

我知道我今天一定做得太多了，（才导致伤口开裂了？是这个原因吗？），但是如果我不去邮局，如果我不去买东西， 有谁会去呢？！妹妹住得离我很远， 妈妈总是很忙。只是一个小手术，我不能溺爱自己，生活还要继续。我更担心手术两天之后， 我的肚子还很胖， 想到这点我就想哭, 我不喜欢胖， 哈哈！

I know I have done too much today，but if I dont go to the post Office, if I dont go shopping, who will?! My sisters lives a long way from me, my mum is always busy. It's just a small operation, I cant mollycoddle myself, life must go on! I'm more worried about the fact two days after my operation, my stomach is still fat, I just want to cry, I don't like being fat lol!

我今天做得太多

我想也许我今天做得太多了。我清早走着我去邮局，我走了大约二十分钟。早上晚些时候（这里一般会说“接着”），因为我需要去买东西，所以我再需要出去又得走路。 在下午，我尝试了一点休息了一会，我只是和我的邻居坐着看电视和跟我的邻居喝喝茶。 

I think I might have done a bit too much today. I walked to the Post Office early in the morning. Later on in the morning I needed to go shopping, so I had to go out walking again. In the afternoon I tried to rest a little. I just sat watching telly and drinking tea with my neighbour.

今晚我做了一个一些很简单的饭菜，我现在我一边看电视一边写中文作文，我还是坐着呀！我不累，我得做某些事，我这么太无聊了！尽管如此不过，现在， 我肚子疼，我刚吃了止疼药。 

Tonight I cooked a simple meal and now I am watching telly and writing Chinese, I'm still sitting down! I'm not tired, I have to do something, I'm so bored! Still. my stomach hurts now, I've taken some painkillers.

我知道我今天一定是做得太多，但是如果我不去邮局，如果我不去买东西， 还有谁会去呢？！妹妹住得离我很远， 妈妈总是很忙。只是一个小手术，我不能溺爱自己，生活还要继续。我更担心手术两天之后， 我的肚子还很胖鼓， 我就很想哭, 我不喜欢胖， 哈哈！

I know I have done too much today，but if I dont go to the post Office, if I dont go shopping, who will?! My sisters lives a long way from me, my mum is always busy. It's just a small operation, I cant mollycoddle myself, life must go on! I'm more worried about the fact two days after my operation, my stomach is still fat, I just want to cry, I don't like being fat lol!

your chinese is good. and i don't konw if you want a correction. 

加油。

我今天做得太多

我想也许我今天做得太多。我清早走去邮局，我走了大约二十分钟。早上晚些的时候，我要去买东西，所以我还需要出去走路。 在下午，我尝试了休息了一下，我坐着看电视和跟我的邻居喝茶。

I think I might have done a bit too much today. I walked to the Post Office early in the morning. Later on in the morning I needed to go shopping, so I had to go out walking again. In the afternoon I tried to rest a little. I just sat watching telly and drinking tea with my neighbour.

今晚我做了一道很简单的饭菜，我现在一边看电视一边写中文，我还是坐着呀！我不累，我得做（一）些事，我这么无聊！尽管如此，现在， 我肚子疼，我吃了止疼药。
Tonight I cooked a simple meal and now I am watching telly and writing Chinese, I'm still sitting down! I'm not tired, I have to do something, I'm so bored! Still. my stomach hurts now, I've taken some painkillers.

我知道我今天一定做得太多事情，但是如果我不去邮局，如果我不去买东西， 有谁会去呢？！妹妹住得离我很远， 妈妈总是很忙。只是一个小手术，我不能放纵自己，生活还要继续。我更担心手术两天之后， 我的肚子还很胖， 我就想哭, 我不喜欢胖， 哈哈！

I know I have done too much today，but if I dont go to the post Office, if I dont go shopping, who will?! My sisters lives a long way from me, my mum is always busy. It's just a small operation, I cant mollycoddle myself, life must go on! I'm more worried about the fact two days after my operation, my stomach is still fat, I just want to cry, I don't like being fat lol!