8/2 Sunburn
I went to a beach with two friends from this noon.The weather was cloudy when we left home, but we got a beach it became so good! It was clear and sunny.Very hot! Actually the purpose of coming to beach was to get sunburn, so the weather was so good to get it. And then, we played volleyball at night as usual and had dinner together, and it was around 1am when I came back. I think that I've been going out way too much lately.
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8/2 Sunburn Beach Tanning1
I went to a beach with two friends from this noon this afternoon.The weather was cloudy when we left home, but we got a arrived at the beach it became hot and sunnybecame so good! It was clear and sunny.Very hot! Actually the purpose of coming to beach was to get sunburn, so the weather was so good to get it. we came here for a tan and the weather was perfect for our purpose. And then, We even played volleyball at during the night and as usual and we had dinner together. , and It was around about 1am when I came back. I think that I've have been going out way too much lately.
1. Or you can say, "Tanning At The Beach". Tanning and sunburn are two different things. Check your dictionary.
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“so the weather was so good to get it” I think make the first“so” change to “as” is better but I am not sure (^_<)v
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