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All children love the holidays. They are wait for it with impatiently, and often plan in advance, what they will do. Everyone wants to have a great time and have a  perfect holiday. Personally, for me the perfect vacation, is a vacation filled with new acquaintances, joy, new sensations, whether it be a fine holiday abroad or just on the Ukraine coast. The holiday, in which there is no time for the interenet, when you spend all day with friends, come home late at night, go to bed, and in the morning you already know what interesting things you want to do. Generally, vacation is a great opportunity to get some sleep. Also ideal for a vacation, you can relax with your family. You read, play and rest. I can say that my summer holidays are great, but not ideal, since I dream to relax abroad on an island in the Pacific Ocean, as well as a trip to England or China. In short, the perfect vacation - a vacation where you relax and spend time doing the things you enjoy.

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Correct, please, my essay:)

All children love holidays. They wait for them anxiously. Everyone wants to spend a great pleasure to call them ideal. In my opinion, the perfect vacation is the one that is filled with new acquaintances, joy, new sensations, a nice trip abroad, or just on the sea coast.  When one spends all day with friends, gets home late at night, and finally goes to bed, in the morning you already know what you want to do. Generally, going on a vacation is a great opportunity to get some sleep, and rest with the family; plus, no Internet. You read, play and rest. I can say that the summer holidays I have are nice, but not ideal. Since this I have enough rest abroad on an island in the Pacific Ocean, I dream about it. Also, of a trip to England or China. In short, the perfect vacation - a vacation where you rest and spend time with a great pleasure.