Abstract
Two different viscosity measurements on the silicone rubber (Silpuran
2430) provide different viscosity model parameters. thereupon
The results are analyzed and evaluated using the COMSOL program
determines the flow rates for the respective parameter groups. Thereby
you can see the test results and the simulation results
Compare, so you can find out the right viscosity measurement.
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Abstract
Two different viscosity measurements on the silicone rubber (Silpuran2430) provide different viscosity model parameters. thereupon('Thereupon the results are analyzed...')
The results are analyzed and evaluated using the COMSOL program
determines('program which determines...') the flow rates for the respective parameter groups. Thereby
you can see the test results and the simulation results
Compare, so you can('Compare to find out...') find out the right viscosity measurement.
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-Jeff
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Abstract
Two different viscosity measurements are performed on the silicone rubber (Silpuran2430), which provide different viscosity model parameters. Thereupon,
the results are analyzed and evaluated using the COMSOL program to
determines the flow rates for the respective parameter groups. Thereby,
you can see the test results and the simulation results can be
compared so you can find out to determine the right viscosity measurement.
I hope I understood the process/goal properly :) Please note, pronouns such as "I' and "you" are generally avoided in technical writing of this type. If you have questions, feel free to ask.
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