The importance things for two people leading to the marriage decision.
In my opinion, if two people want to have a happy and lasting marrige, except for the love , we also need the respection, the belief, and the sharing. If I consider getting marriage , I will choose one person having the following characteristics:
1. He has goals and strong will for those in his career ( I can not find any phrase to describe this characteristic ).
2. He need to have the responsibility with himself and his family.
3. He can make me feel good and comfortable when he is around me.
4. I can talk about anything with him without the fear of being judged.
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The importance (important: "importance" is a noun, "important" is an adjective)things for two people leading(I'm not sure exactly what you want to say here. Recommend: "for two people to consider before marriage.") to the marriage decision.
In my opinion, if two people want to have a happy and lasting marrige(marriage), except for the (other than , or, besides)love , we also need the respection(respect; respect can be a noun or a verb), the belief, and the sharing. If I consider getting marriage (married, or remove "getting" and change to "If I consider marriage,"), I will choose one person having (who has)the following characteristics:1. He has goals and strong will for those in his career(Maybe you mean "ambition." This is a desire to achieve more. Maybe you mean "career-minded" this is someone who invests a lot into his career and takes it very seriously) ( I can not find any phrase to describe this characteristic ).
2. He need (needs)to have the responsibility with (take responsibility for)himself and his family.
3. He can make (makes)me feel good and comfortable when he is around me.
4. I can talk about anything with him without the fear of being judged.
Looks like a solid foundation for marriage. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.
-Jeff
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In my opinion, if two people want to have a happy and lasting marrige marriage, except for the besides love, we also (If you include 'besides,' also isn't necessary) need the respect ion, the belief (maybe use 'trust' instead of belief), and the sharing. If I consider getting marriage married (you can say "getting married" or remove getting.) , I will choose one a person having who has the following characteristics:
1. He has goals and a strong will (maybe: passion) for those in his career ( I can not find any phrase to describe this characteristic ).
2. He need-s to have the responsibility with be responsible for himself and his family.
3. He can make me feel good and comfortable when he is around me. (I think you can omit this portion and still retain the significance).
4. I can talk about anything with him without the fear of being judged.
HERE, I have included some corrections while trying to maintain your words. I hope this helps!
In my opinion, if two people want to have a happy and lasting marriage, besides love, respect, belief, and sharing are all necessary. If I consider getting married, I will choose a person who has the following characteristics:
- He has goals and a strong will for those in his career.
- He needs to be responsible for himself and his family.
- He can make me feel good and comfortable.
- I can talk about anything with him without the fear of being judged.
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