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today i go to practice driving a car.So nervous i am.i have not driven a car some days.The car get wrong many times because i forget to clutch pedal.i think i'm stupid and i'm a little sad,but i don't give up.i'm so glad to meet so many friend.They encourage me,so i should become more brave and optimistic.Although i'm still not dare to talk with friends with camera.i'm so sorry.
i also want to learn making friends happy.i think the most important thing is to be sincere.so let's be relatively good.Forget the unhappy things and smile to life.
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Today I practiced driving a car. I was quite nervous as I had not driven a car for many days. I drove badly quite often because I tend to forget to hit the brakes. I think I'm stupid and I'm slightly sad but I know I shouldn't give up. I'm glad to have met all my friends. They encourage me when I feel day and make me feel brave and optimistic. Despite this, I'm still not confident enough to talk with them via webcam.

I want to learn to be a good friend. I think the most important thing is being sincere and acting with integrity. Forgetting the small things and simply smiling to life as a whole.

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Today I go get to practise 1 driving a car and so I am nervous i am.I have not driven a car for some days now.The car get wrong many times did drive smoothly because I forget to handle the clutch pedal combination correctly. I think i'm I am stupid and Ii'm feel a little sad.  However,but I don't will never give up. I'm am so glad to meet so many friends. They encourage me,so and I should become more be braver and more optimistic.  Although I'm am still shy chatiing with people in front of the webcamnot dare to talk with friends with camera. Ii'm am so sorry.

I also want like to learn making how to make my friends happy. I think 2 The most important thing is to be sincere3.  so let's be relatively good.4 Forget the unhappy things and smile to at life.

Since you value sincerity and honesty.  Here are my unapologetic comments.  They may sound blunt but they are for your own good :) Here goes:  Don't use I'm, I'd etc when writing essays.  Use the full form instead.  These contractions are use for writing dialogs or in very informal settings where faster communication is needed.

You need to capitalize your "i" when referring to oneself.  This is an inviolable rule.  It is like going outdoor wearing a shirt with no pants or skirt.  I did remember telling you about this once.  If you do not know this rule, then remember it.  I am not going to correct essays for those who are recalcitrant or who thinks they know better.  It will be a waste of my time and your ultimate loss.

1.  As a noun, it is spelt with a "c" - practice and as a verb, it is spelt with an "s" - practise.  Americans tend to be sloppy in such details.  Another example, licence is a noun and license is a verb.

2. No need to use phrases like, "I think".  It means that you are not sure.  Go ahead and make bold statements.  People tend to listen and believe in you more when you are confident.

3.  Or you can say, "... important thing is sincerity."

4.  I don't understand what you are writing here.  Write in Chinese if you wanted an accurate correction.

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Today i go to practiced driving a car.So I was so nervous i am.i because I have not driven a car in a long time some days.

The car get wrong stalled many times because i forget to clutch the pedal.i think i'm stupid and i'm a I feel a little sad,but i don't won't give up.

Structure: I verb [I am] adj and verb2 [I am] adj2  Example: I feel strong and think I am wonderful.

i'm so glad to meet so many friends.They encourage me,so i should become more braver and more optimistic.

Although However, i'm still not don't  dare to talk with friends with camera video chat.i'm so sorry.

i also want to learn how to make making friends happy.i think the most important thing is to be sincere.

so let's be relatively good.* Forget the unhappy things and smile to at life.

* I don't know what you mean?  是不是要说"我乐观来看吧？“

# Remember to capitalize all your 'i's (i → I )

# 掌握自信不简单咯。加油！