I don't can to sleep tonight and I writing.
Hello everyone,
tonight I don't can to sleep and i decided to writer my first notebook page :)
My name is Alberto, I have 32 and I live in Vicenza (North Italy). My city is famous in all world for the more important Gold Exhibition, and for the Andrea Palladio very famous historical architet (can you see Basilica Palladiana, Villa dei Nani ecc..).
My best hobby it is also my work, I am IT System Administrator in a company from Vicenza. I will hope a day to make my dream and open a my company, but I will tell IT in another occasion.
Now I think I must to try sleep, tomorrow my the alarm sounds at 6:30 AM
See you soon...
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I Can’t Sleep Tonight, So I’m Writing
Hello everyone,
Tonight, I can’t sleep and I decided
to write my first notebook page :)
My name is Alberto, I am 32 years old and I live in Vicenza, which is located in Northern Italy. My city is famous all around the world, for the Gold Exhibition, and for the very famous architect Andrea Palladio. You can see some of the buildings he designed, among them, the Basilica Palladiana, Villa dei Nani, etc.
My favorite hobby is also my job. I am an IT System Administrator for a company here in Vicenza. My dream is to one day open and run my own company. I will write about my IT job at another time.
Now I must try to get some
sleep. My alarm is set to go off at 6:30 am. See you soon!
Ciao Alberto! In generale,
penso che la tua composizione sia stata scritta abbastanza bene. It was easy
for me to understand; however, I did notice a few mistakes. The main mistakes I
noted were: word usage and word placement. I also noticed some words although
correct, were out of order. But, for your first notebook entry, I think you did
well! If you have any questions, please let me know!
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I can't to sleep tonight and I'm writing.
Hello everyone,Tonight I can't to sleep and I decided to write my first notebook page :)
My name is Alberto, I am 32 and I live in Vicenza (Northern Italy). My city is famous in all world [better: world-famous] for the very important Gold Exhibition, and for the Andrea Palladio, a very famous historical architect (you can see Basilica Palladiana, Villa dei Nani etc.).
My favorite hobby it is also my work. I am an IT System Administrator in a company from Vicenza. I will hopefully one day achieve my dream and open a my own company, but I will talk about IT in another occasion.
Now I think I must to try sleep. Tomorrow my the alarm sounds at 6:30 AM
See you soon...
Hi Alberto! Great job. :) I hope you get some sleep.
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I can't sleep tonight so I'm writing a notebook entry.
Hello everyone,
tonight I can't sleep and I have decided to write my first notebook page :)
My name is Alberto, I am 32 years old and I live in Vicenza (North Italy). My city is famous for the most important Gold Exhibition, and for being the birthplace of Andrea Palladio. Andrea Palladio is a very famous historical architect -- he is responsible for designing Basilica Palladiana, Villa dei Nani, and more).
My favorite hobby is also my work; I am an IT System Administrator in a company from Vicenza. I dream to one day open my own company, but I will explain IT in another occasion. Haha!
Now I think I must to try sleep, tomorrow my alarm goes off at 6:30 AM
See you soon...
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A good sleep for you, I wake up at 5:30 a.m
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