Please help correct my English: My First Week of Ma
Please help correct my English: My First Week of May
May 1st is a national holiday in China. We had a 4-day vacation. As my son and my daughter both stayed at home for the entire 4 days, I was busier than usual working days.
Before the vacation ended, I had a trip alone to Bangkok. Had I left earlier, it would be too much for my husband and my mother-in-law to take care of two children out of the school. Had I left later, my Chinese visa would have expired.
I spent three days in Bangkok. On the first day in Bangkok, I joined a tourist group and went to two floating markets. It was very exhausting so I took it easy in the following two days. Traveling alone sometimes is nice. It is a way to jump out everyday life circle and retrospect.I met a Chinese real estate agent in Bangkok and had some long-hour talks with her. She is much younger than me but we have a lot in common by coincidence.
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Please help correct my English: My First Week of Ma
Please help correct my English: My First Week of MayMay 1st is a national holiday in China. We had a 4-day vacation. As my son and my daughter stayed at home for the entire 4 days, I was busier than usual.
Before the vacation ended, I took a [solo] trip to Bangkok. Had I left earlier, it would be too much for my husband and my mother-in-law to take care of two children. Had I left later, my Chinese visa would have expired.
I spent three days in Bangkok. On the first day in Bangkok, I joined a tourist group and went to two floating markets. It was very exhausting so I took it easy in the following two days. Traveling alone is nice sometimes. It is a way to jump out of everyday life circle and to reflect. I met a Chinese real estate agent in Bangkok and had some long-hour talks with her. She is much younger than me but by coincidence, we have a lot in common.
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