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I need this to be coherent, natural and professional. Thanks In a pursuit to create a comfortable life for myself, I sent my resume to some universities close to my parental village and a university in Basht offered me a position to work as a math professor over there, after graduating from Concordia university. Degrees from Canadian universities are greatly valued in Iran, so following my passion to work as a math professor in towns such as Basht would give me the best possible quality of life.

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I need this to be coherent, natural and professional. Thanks

In a the pursuit to of createing a comfortable life for myself, I sent my resume to some universities close to my parental village, and a university in Basht offered me a position to work as a math professor over there, after my graduation graduating from Concordia uUniversity. Degrees from Canadian universities are greatly valued in Iran, so following my passion to work as a math professor in a towns such as Basht would give me the best possible quality of life.


Mostly correct, great job! Just gave you some more natural word choices.

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