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About mother's day It was mother's day yesterday

I gave a cosmetics to my mother instead of flowers yesterday

She likes cosmetics!

I used to give a flowers to my mother

But It's gonna changed this year

She looks like Happy!

And , I became Happy too

Basically ,We give a flowers to our's mother on mother's day in japan

It's kind of traditional

What do you do in your countys?

Are these sentences correct?

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About mother's day

It was mother's day yesterday

I gave  a  some cosmetics to my mother instead of flowers yesterday

She likes cosmetics!

I used to give  a   flowers to my mother

But It's gonna changed  going to change (You can say 'gonna', but it shouldn't write it) this year

She looks like  looked really happy!

And , I became was happy too

Basically  Normally, we give  a  flowers to our mothers on mother's day in Japan

It's kind of traditional

What do you do in your countys countries ?

Are these sentences correct?


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About Mother's Day:

It was Mother's Day yesterday

I gave cosmetics (make-up is more commonly used) to my mother instead of flowers yesterday

She likes cosmetics (make-up)!

I used to give flowers to my mother

But I changed my mind this year

She looks happy!

And, I became happy too

Basically, we give flowers to our mothers on Mother's Day in Japan

It's a tradition!

What do you do in your countries?

Are these sentences correct? They are now!

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About Mother's Day.

It was Mother's Day yesterday.

I gave cosmetics to my mother instead of flowers.

She likes cosmetics!

I used to give flowers to my mother, but it's changed this year.

She looked like she was happy!

And, I became happy too.

Basically ,we give a flowers to our mothers on Mother's Day in Japan.

It's kind of traditional

What do you do in your countries?


What I would have written is below:

It was Mother's Day yesterday; I gave cosmetics to my mother instead of flowers. She likes cosmetics a lot. I used to give flowers to my mother, but it's changed this year. She looked happy to receive them; I became happy too. 

It's a tradition to give our mothers flowers on Mother's Day in Japan. What do you do in your countries?


The way you  have set up your sentences makes it look like you are writing a poem. If you are writing normally, we prefer to write in paragraphs, with no lines in between our sentences - unless we are starting a new paragraph.

I hope this helped. Let me know if you have any other questions! 

Cheers :)

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Mother's Day

It was Mother's Day yesterdayI gave cosmetics to my mother instead of flowers yesterday
She likes cosmetics!
I used to give flowers to my mother, but I changed my gift this year
She looked Happy!
I became Happy too
Generally, people give flowers to their mother on Mother's Day in Japan
It's kind of a tradition.
What do you do in your country?
Are these sentences correct?

In my country, we have dinner with our parents.

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