I so much want to know how native speakers express the following meanings. His love of family and his passion for math have determined his life choices. For his entire life, he has been living with h

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I so much want to know how native speakers express the following meanings. His love of family and his passion for math have determined his life choices. For his entire life, he has been living with his big family of eleven siblings and parents. There are close bonds among them. His parents live in a small village. The siblings do not live far from there because they do not want to miss the warm family atmosphere. They live and work in either the village or towns close to the village. A town named Basht is around 20 kilometers away from the village. He has been working over there as a math teacher for years. Although, with a master degree, working in big cities is much more lucrative.

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I so much want to know how native speakers would express the following meanings ideas.

His love of family and his passion for math have determined his life choices. For his entire life, he has been liveding with his big large family (consisting) of eleven siblings and parents. There are they have a close bonds among them, and They come get together every weekend. His parents live in a small village, and The his siblings do not live far away from there. They live and work in either the village or nearby towns close to the village. There is a town named Basht is around 20 kilometers away from the village. where he has been working over there as a math teacher for years. Although, with despite having a Master's degree, which would make working in big cities is much more lucrative.

English prefers reducing redundancy by avoiding repetition. It would also be better to try to connect sentences with similar information by using conjunctions, like what I did above to connect some of your sentences.

I so much want to know how native speakers express the following meanings.

His love of family and his passion for math have determined his life choices. For his entire life, he has lived with or near his big family of eleven siblings and parents. There are close bonds among them. His parents live in a small village. His siblings do not live far from there because they don't want to miss the warm family atmosphere. They live and work in either the village or towns close to the village. . He has worked as a math teacher for years in Basht, a town around 20 kilometers from the village, even though, with his masters degree, he would make much more working in a big city. OR even though he knows that, with his masters degree, teaching in a big city is much more lucrative.

His love for his family and his passion for math has determined his life choices. For his entire life, he has been living with his family of eleven siblings and parents. There are close bonds among them. His parents live in a small village. The siblings do not live far from them because they don't want to miss the warm family atmosphere. They live and worked in either the village or towns close to the village. He has been working in a town named Basht, around 20 kilometers away from the village, as a math teacher for years. Although, with a master degree, working in big cities is much more lucrative.

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