I went to the dentist today
I went to the dentist this morning.
I had a bad wisdomtooth. After looking at it for a few seconds, the dentist decided to extracted it.
My mom went to the dental hospital with me. Hearing the dentist's suggestion, she asked me to leave with her. She doesn't trust the dentist very much. She heard my aunt had the same problem with me, but she didn't have it pulled. She believed it had side effects to have it pulled. She was also afraid that pulling my tooth would be first step of my miserable treatment which would cost a lot of unnecessary payment.
After I left with her, I learned that she wished that I did nothing about the bad tooth until it gave me pains. No pains, no treatment. I was kind of angry and argued with her. I told her I would go to another dental hospital to listen to some ohter's suggestions. I believe doctors more than she does. Maybe I am more naive. Then she phoned my aunt and learned that she had her tooth pulled at last. She visted many hospitals and dentists and finally got it pulled as dentists told her.
Then we went back to the dental hospital to have it pulled. It was fast and painless. And not as she thought, I needn't go a second time. It's done, quickly and peacefully.
It cost me 270 yuan. I think it's reasonable for a famous dental hospital.
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I went to the dentist this morning.
I had a bad wisdomtooth How did you know it was the wisdom tooth in the first place? My tooth was feeling achy. After looking at it for a few seconds, the dentist diagnosed it was with the wisdom tooth and decided to have it extracted it.
My mom went to the dental hospital had accompanied with me. On hearing the dentist's advice suggestion, she asked me to leave with her. She doesn't trust have much faith in the dentist very much. She had heard from my aunt had having the same problem with me, but she didn't have it pulled out. She believed that there will be it had side effects after the extraction to have it pulled. She was also afraid that pulling my tooth would be first step of my miserable treatment afterwards, I will be suffering and not to mention the bundle of money spent which would cost a lot of unnecessary payment.
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I went to a dentist today
I went to a dentist this morning.
I had a bad wisdom tooth. After looking at it for a few seconds, the dentist decided to extracted it.
My mom went to the dental hospital with me. Hearing the dentist's suggestion, she asked me to leave with her. She doesn't trust the dentist very much. She heard my aunt had the same problem as me, but she didn't have it pulled. She believed it had side effects to have it pulled. She was also afraid that pulling my tooth would be first step of my miserable treatment which would cost a lot of unnecessary payment.
After I left with her, I learned that she wished that I did nothing about the bad tooth until it gave me pains. No pains, no treatment. I was kind of angry and argued with her. I told her I would go to another dental hospital to listen to some other's suggestions. I believe doctors' (knowledge?) more than hers. Maybe I am too naive. Then she phoned my aunt and learned that she had her tooth pulled at last. She visited many hospitals and dentists and finally got it pulled as dentists told her.
Then we went back to the dental hospital to have it pulled. It was fast and painless. And not as she thought, I needn't go a second time. It's done, quickly and peacefully.
It cost me 270 yuan. I think it's reasonable for a famous dental hospital.
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Then So we went back to the dental hospital to have it pulled out. It The extraction was fast and painless. And It was not as what she had thought. I needn't don't have to go back for a second time. It's done, was quickly and peacefully and a no fuss procedure.
It The cost came out to be me 270 Yuan. I think it's reasonable For a famous prestigious dental hospital, the cost was reasonable.
写得不錯, 只是些句辞不順, 不够自然.
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