A new leader in Thailand
Thailand will have a new leader in a pair of days. This new king is not as popular as his father because most of the time he is abroad. Nevertheless, the future king is well trained with military skills.
There will be an outstanding event for celebrating the new king which will include some rituals. Some of which are to rever the new leader.
This celebration will not shielded of scrutiny because citizens will see entirely the ritual.
However, there is a climate of uncertainty for the monarch, a general election was held on 24 March. As the time goes on, we would see the political Thailand future.
Thank you for your corrections, guys! :D
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A new leader in Thailand
Thailand will have a new leader in a pair of few / two days. This new king is not as popular as his father because most of the time he is abroad. Nevertheless, the future king is well trained with military skills.There will be an outstanding event for celebrating the new king which will include some rituals. Some of which are to revere the new leader.
This celebration will not shielded of scrutiny be hidden from the public because citizens will see entirely the ritual.
However, there is a climate of uncertainty for the monarch, a general election was held on 24 March. As the time goes on, we would will see the political Thailand future of Thailand.
Thank you for your corrections, guys! :D
Hi - overall really good job! Just a few notes:
1) In English, we usually don't say "a pair of days". It's usually "a few days" (which means 2-3 days), or you actually tell the person how many days (e.g. "2 days", "3 days", etc...)
2) "shielded of scruity" is a bit awkward, may be written better to say "hidden from the public"
Others are just minor corrections. Hope this helps!
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