Writing for the school. Expressing opinion
Nowadays there are a lot of people who download films or music from the Net, even all kind of books. In addition it s easy to find them in a brief period of time.
The problem of downloading them for free is the illegacy of the action. I believe that it should be legal.
Firstly, going to the cinema is very expensive specially for big families. In most cases there are people that can't afford as much money.
Secondly, the prices of the CDs music are algo high, moreover there are people who don t have a cd player or prefer listening to music from the mobile phone with earphones.
Finally, I think that paying a fine is not a good way to avoid this stuff because there are several things that can be done, for instance, to low the prices of buying music or films from the Net.
In conclusion, I believe that the problem will remain if the prices continue been so high.
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Writing for the school. Expressing opinion
Nowadays there are a lot of people who download films or music from the Net, even all kind of books. In addition it's easy to find them quickly.
The problem of downloading them for free is the illegality of the action. I believe that it should be legal.
Firstly, going to the cinema is very expensive especially for big families. In most cases there are people that can't afford so much money.
Secondly, the price of CDs and music are also high, moreover there are people who don t have a CD player or prefer listening to music from the mobile phone with earphones.
Finally, I think that paying a fine is not a good way to avoid this stuff because there are several things that can be done, for instance, to lower the prices of buying music or films from the Net.
In conclusion, I believe that the problem will remain if the prices continue to be high.
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igor, is not my opinion, is just an invented writing for the school. Thanks
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I just want to comment it:) movie and music makers cannot just lower the price. In thit case you should understand that if you want to reduce the price of film or music, you will have to put up with an increasing amount of advertising during the film or listening to music. So, if you can't buy all music you want but listen to it legally that's your rule, in thit case there are a lot of services where you can just pay for monthly subscription and listen whatever you want, same with movies.
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