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Your son has been experiencing some difficulties at his elementary school. He has been unhappy for several weeks. You want to talk to his teacher.
• Describe the problems your son is having
• Suggest some solutions to the problems.
• Make an appointment with the teacher to discuss the problems and your solutions.
• Dear Mr. Sinclair,
Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Sean Yi, and I am (S)’s father. I am writing this to inform you that my son is studying 4th grade in your class learning difficulty in subjects.
Our family immigrated to Canada from the South Korea just last year. We concern about his English. Some of the subjects such as math and computer class my son takes are doing well without problems. However, as English is not his first language, I wonder if he is struggling more than the other kids. When we ask her about the language, he usually lowers his head and says he doesn’t want to talk about it.
I know that the school year is just getting started and kids are like sponges when it comes to learning languages but I do not want to wait until it is too late for his to catch up. I would be very grateful if you had any suggestions for us to make sure (S) doesn’t fall behind.
I would like to meet you in person to discuss the problem and I am available any time. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Sean Yi
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Dear Mr. Smith,
Our family immigrated to Canada from the South Korea just last year. We are concerned about his English. Some of the subjects, such as math and computer class, that my son takes are doing going well, without any problems. However, as because English is not his first language, I wonder if he is struggling more than the other kids. When we ask her him about the language, he usually lowers his head and says he doesn’t want to talk about it.
I know that the school year is has just getting started, and kids are like sponges when it comes to learning languages, but I do not want to wait until it is too late for his him to catch up. I would be very grateful if you had any suggestions for us to make sure (S) doesn’t fall behind.
I would like to meet you in person to discuss the problem and I am available any time. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Sean Yi
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