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She took me to a stylish Izakaya(?) tonight.
We were surprised to not have met for so many years.
We had experienced a lot of things while we didn't see each other. Therefore, we could praise what each other had experienced.
We felt like something interesting was starting again.
Please Check My English Sentences
Today, I met up a friend after not seeing her for a long time, and she later took me to a stylish Izakaya at night. We were both surprised that we have not seen each other over many years. Both of us it seems were busy experiencing many things over that time, which prevented us from seeing each other, and our discussion of them lead to mutual praise over what each others had experienced. We parted feeling as if something interesting might start again.*
Hi, Hiro. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your ideas, and for ease of reading. My apologies if I misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. J.
*From your last sentence, it sounds as if that something is romantic, but I am not certain this was your intention… (*-^)
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