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Our Birthday Celebration
Yesterday was my dad’s birthday—his sixtieth! Although I have only shared part of that time with him, I still cannot believe it has passed by so quickly. For lunch, my mom prepared roast pork, boiled rice with bamboo shoots, and fried soybean curd. My parents love any type of Japanese confectionery, so I made some Azuki bean sweet jelly (Mizu-Yokan) both as a present, and as dessert.
Hi, Aika-san. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your ideas, and for ease of reading. My apologies if I misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. J.
P.S. Belated Happy Birthday wishes (お誕生日おめでとうございます。) to your father! (*-^)
Birthday celebration
Yesterday was my dad’s birthday. He turned 60 years old. I can’t believe how fast that time has passed by. so fast. At For lunch, my mom prepared made roast pork and boiled rice with bamboo shoots and fried soybean curds. My parents love Japanese confectionery sweets(UK) or candy(US), so I presented gave him with some azuki-bean jello.Want to progress faster?
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