My garden
In my garden there are 2 tall trees. On of them is a Pine. I like this tree because his shape as same as a beach umbrella.
In my garden there are several variety of flowers, all have different colors: pink, white, yellow, purple .... It's very beautiful.
I like to walk in my garden.
I listen birds singing, I look butterflys flying and the vegetation transforming.
In the part of it, there is a little vegetable garden.
I like to plant some vegetable ; for example: salads, tomatos, zucchinis, potatos and aromatics plants.
In summer, when it's sunny, I like take my breakfast in my garden and I pass many hours to contemplate.
It's so wonderful. (thank you for the correction)
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My garden
In my garden there are 2 tall trees. One of them is a Pine. I like this tree because his shape as same as it is shaped like a beach umbrella.In my garden there are several varieties of flowers, and all have different colors: pink, white, yellow, purple .... It's very beautiful.
I like to walk in my garden.
I listen to birds singing, I look at butterflys flying and the vegetation transforming.
In the one part of it, there is a little vegetable garden.
I like to plant some vegetables ; for example: salads, tomatos, zucchinis, potatos and aromatics plants.
In summer, when it's sunny, I like to take my breakfast in my garden and I pass many hours there to contemplate.
It's so wonderful. (thank you for the correction)
Hello! I enjoyed reading your entry- bon travail! :-) a few suggestions on word choice:
salads: lettuce (a "salad" is usually used for a medley of vegetables and other foods)
take: eat is more commonly used (at least in American English)
contemplate: this verb needs an object- what do you contemplate in your garden? Or, you could use the adverb "I pass many contemplative hours there"
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In my garden there are 2 tall trees. On of them is a Pine. I like this tree as it looks like a beach umbrella.
It has variety of flowers, all have different colors: pink, white, yellow, purple .... It's very beautiful.
I like to walk in my garden.
I listen to birds singing, look at butterflys flying and enjoy the vegetation transforming.
Within it, there is a little vegetable garden.
I like to plant some vegetables ; for example: salads, tomatos, zucchinis, potatos and aromatics plants.
In summer, when it's sunny, I like having my breakfast in it and spending many hours to contemplate.
It's so wonderful. (thank you for the correction)
You don't need to say my garden but for the first time then say It .
It has variety of flowers, all have different colors: pink, white, yellow, purple .... It's very beautiful.
I like to walk in my garden.
I listen to birds singing, look at butterflys flying and enjoy the vegetation transforming.
Within it, there is a little vegetable garden.
I like to plant some vegetables ; for example: salads, tomatos, zucchinis, potatos and aromatics plants.
In summer, when it's sunny, I like having my breakfast in it and spending many hours to contemplate.
It's so wonderful. (thank you for the correction)
You don't need to say my garden but for the first time then say It .
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In my garden there are 2 tall trees, one of which is a Pine. I like this tree because its shape as same as a beach umbrella. My garden also contains several different varieties of flowers, each bursting with a multitude of colours: pink, white, yellow, purple.... It's very beautiful! I love to walk around my garden listen birds sing and watching the butterflys fly around tge growing plants. In one corner, there is a little vegetable patch. I like to plant many types of vegetables here such as salad leaves, tomatos, zucchinis, potatos and aromatic plants. In summer (when it's sunny) I take my breakfast out into the garden and I pass the time eating and contemplating life. It's so wonderful.
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