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Nowadays we spend our free time opposide the TV screen. Some people think it affects the person, others think differently. So, where is the truth? Let's find it out.
My personal view is that watching TV is a waste of time. It takes our time that we can spend productively, for example: self-development, visiting relatives, hanging out with our friends. Also I wanted to say that passive lifestyle leads health problems. There is a probability of gaining weight, losing eyesight and more.
However, there are some people who have another point of view. They believe that TV is enjoyable and funny. Moreover there are people who argue that it is helpful for other sides of our life: cooking, gardening, news etc.
To tell the truth, I disagree with opposing opinion. Firstly, there are so many other kinds of interesting activities for our free time. To improve our cooking skils we can read a special book or surfing the Internet using our phone outside. It will be more helpful for our health and interests. Secondly, to keep our atheletic body we should go for a walk but should not watch TV lying on sofa.
In summary, I believe that the more we sit opposide the TV screen the more we put our health at risk.
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correct please
Nowadays we spend our free time opposide opposite ("in front of" or "facing" would be more common) the TV screen. Some people think it affects the person; others think differently. So, where what is the truth? Let's find it out.My personal view is that watching TV is a waste of time. It takes up our time that we can could spend productively, for example: self-development, visiting relatives, hanging out with our friends. Also I wanted to say that passive lifestyle leads health problems. There is a probability likelihood of gaining weight, losing one's eyesight and more.
However, there are some people who have another point of view. They believe that TV is enjoyable and funny. Moreover there are people who argue that it is helpful for other sides of our life: cooking, gardening, news etc.
To tell the truth, I disagree with opposing opinion. Firstly, there are so many other kinds of interesting activities activity for our free time. To improve our cooking skills we can read a specialist book or surfing the Internet using our mobile phone outside. It will be more helpful for our health and interests. Secondly, to keep our atheletic body in shape we should go for a walk but should not watch TV lying on a sofa.
In summary, I believe that the more we sit opposide opposite (or "in front of", etc) the TV screen the more we put our health at risk.
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correct please Please Correct(this is understandable in your original writing but "Please correct" sounds more natural to me)
Nowadays we spend our free time opposide (opposite is the correct spelling but saying "facing" or "staring at" would sound better/ more natural) the TV screen. Some people think it affects the person, others think differently. So, where(which) is the truth? Let's find it out.My personal view is that watching TV is a waste of time. It takes (away) our time that we can spend productively, for example: self-development, visiting relatives, hanging out with our friends. Also, I wanted to say that a passive lifestyle leads to health problems. There is a probability chance of gaining weight, losing (maybe diminished would be better in this case?) eyesight and more.
However, there are some people who have another point of view. They believe that TV is enjoyable and funny. Moreover, there are people who argue that it is helpful for other sides of our life: cooking, gardening, news, and etc.
To tell the truth, I disagree with that opposing opinion. Firstly, there are so many other kinds of interesting activities for to do in our free time. To improve our cooking skils skills we can read a special book or surfing the Internet using our phone outside. It will be more helpful for (beneficial to) our health and interests. Secondly, to keep our athletic body we should go for a walk but should and not watch TV lying on the sofa.
In summary, I believe that the more we sit opposide (opposite is the correct spelling but using the word "staring at" or "facing the" would sound better) the TV screen the more we put our health at risk.
Nice job though! Is this really how you feel about television? If so what and even if not do you believe that cellphones have the same effect??
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Nowadays we spend our free time opposide the TV screen. Some people think it affects the person, others think differently. So, where is the truth? Let's find it out.
I think that watching TV is a waste of time. It takes our time that we can spend productively, for example: self-development, visiting relatives, hanging out with our friends. Also I wanted to say that passive lifestyle leads health problems. There is a probability of gaining weight, losing eyesight and more.
However, there are some people who have another point of view. They believe that TV is enjoyable and funny. Moreover there are people who argue that it is helpful for other sides of our life: cooking, gardening, news etc.
To tell the truth, I disagree with opposing opinion. Firstly, there are so many other kinds of interesting activities for our free time. To improve our cooking skils we can read a special book or surfing the Internet using our phone outside. It will be more helpful for our health and interests. Secondly, to keep our atheletic body we should go for a walk but should not watch TV lying on sofa.
In summary, I believe that the more we sit opposide the TV screen the more we put our health at risk.
I think that watching TV is a waste of time. It takes our time that we can spend productively, for example: self-development, visiting relatives, hanging out with our friends. Also I wanted to say that passive lifestyle leads health problems. There is a probability of gaining weight, losing eyesight and more.
However, there are some people who have another point of view. They believe that TV is enjoyable and funny. Moreover there are people who argue that it is helpful for other sides of our life: cooking, gardening, news etc.
To tell the truth, I disagree with opposing opinion. Firstly, there are so many other kinds of interesting activities for our free time. To improve our cooking skils we can read a special book or surfing the Internet using our phone outside. It will be more helpful for our health and interests. Secondly, to keep our atheletic body we should go for a walk but should not watch TV lying on sofa.
In summary, I believe that the more we sit opposide the TV screen the more we put our health at risk.
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