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an email to complaint I have attended your session in PKUHSC this afternoon. Although I'm not qualified to apply for the MD program, I have a small recommendation about the session. I read an introduction about your program through the internet of our school which introduced your program and the former communications between the UNMC and PKUHSC, without talking about the requirement. Such as the applicant must be in the last year of their undergraduate study or in the 1st year of their master program. I spent a lot of time to know more about your program but only to find that you only accept students in the last year. I mean if you have posted the requirement on the internet, people who are not allowed to apply would not have spent time to know more about your program and left disappointedly. I offered this recommendation on behalf of myself and I really hope your program will become better to help more students purchase their dreams!

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An Email to of Complaint. 

I had attended your session in at PKUHSC this afternoon. Although I'm not qualified to apply for the MD program, 不要这样写, 显得你吃不到葡萄,说葡萄酸. 还有, 在英中, 表达太囉嗦, However, I have a small recommendation about the s ession suggestion.

I read an introduction about your program through the internet of our school which introduced your program and the former communications on the internet regarding the affiliation between the UNMC and PKUHSC. , without talking There was no mention of  about the requirements or that who may benefit the most from attending it. After the session, I found out that Such as the applicants must either be in their undergraduate the last太随便 final year of their undergraduate study or in the 1st first year of their master program. 

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I had invested heavily of my time and effort to attend the session spent a lot of time to know more about your program but in the end, to my dismay, everything came to naught. only to find that you only accept students in the last year. I mean if you have strongly sugggest that posted the program requirements should be included on the internet brochure to avoid any misunderstanding.

Thank you for considering my suggestion. on the internet, people who are not allowed to apply would not have spent time to know more about your program and left disappointedly.
I offered this recommendation on behalf of myself and I really hope your program will become better to help more students purchase their dreams! 这不是長篇小说, 正式商业交流信, 要一針見血.

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