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Questions

Some teachers say students should be organized into groups to study, while others argue that students should be made to study alone.

Tell us benefits of each study method. Which one do you think is more effective?

Answer

I have experienced group study and individual study. I like to study alone, but I think that group study is more effective than individual study. I will pick up some benefits from both group and individual study, and explain why I think group study is more effective.

At first, I pick up I'll start with the benefits of group study. First, we can get much a wide variety of opinions and ideas. We live and spend time eachEvery person has their own experience, so we everyone have has their own different ideas and ways of thinking. Thus we naturally get other different ideas, opinions, and so on. Second, we can compete with each other people for on the test.This is a truly effective way motivator. If we would get high score in test, because all people think that don’t want to lose or want to win. ("Every student is motivated to get the highest score and win.")Therefore, competition is one of best ways to study more effectively.

Next,I pick up will discuss the benefits of individual study.The best main benefit I think is concentration. We can concentrate on everything when we are alone, because we are able to create a space which is best condition each people think that best suits our method of concentration. When we are with someone else in the same space, we are confused to by someone’s their actions, voice, and existence.

Both ways have benefits, but I’m sure that group study is more effective. We have limited of thinking and ideas if we are alone. What When we study together is the only way this limit is gone. Finally, if we could not concentrate on studying when we study together, we should be looking for other people who are quit quiet and study same subject.