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The second topic of my dairy. I decide to write this text without translator, but i can use dictionary sometimes. This morning was rain. It looked a little weird because snow lies on the ground now. I woke up early this morning and went to my work. The traffic was hard-roads was slippery because of rain. But I arrived to work in time. At work we got new device, so we had a training. It is a very smart thing and I want to try work with this machine. After work I went to the shop. I got some food and buy a fast-food (it called “shaurma”) for dinner. It Is unhealthy food, but so tasty. Also, I had a little talk with my friend, he told me about their president, who left his post. It is all, I had not interesting things today

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The second topic of my dairy.

I decided to write this text without a translator, but I used a dictionary sometimes.
This morning it was raining. It looked a little weird because snow lies on the ground now. I woke up early this morning and went to work. (You could say "my work" but it is uncommon) The traffic was bad; the roads were slippery because of the rain. Regardless,  I arrived to work on time. (It can sound odd to begin a sentence with "but")
At work we got new device, so we had a training on how to use it. It is a very smart thing and I want to try to work with this machine.
After work, I went to the shop. I got some food and bought fast-food called shaurma for dinner. It's unhealthy, but so tasty. ("it" refers to the food so it can be a little repetitive to include the word)
Also, I had a little talk with my friend. He told me about their president, who left his post.
That's all, my day wasn't very interesting.


Good job! Keep practicing, your English is really good.

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The second topic of my dairy.

I decide to write this text without (using a) translator, but I can used a dictionary sometimes.
This morning was raining. It looked a little weird because of the snow lying on the ground now. I woke up early this morning and went to my work. The traffic (Driving?) was hard - roads were slippery because of the rain. But I arrived at work on time.
At work we got a new device, so we had a training for it. It is a very smart thing and I want to try work with this machine.
After work I went to the shop. I got some food and bought some fast-food (it called “shaurma”) for dinner. It Is unhealthy food, but so tasty.
Also, I had a little talk with my friend, he told me about their president, who left his post.
That is all, I had not didn’t see/do many interesting things today.


Hi Olga,

Well done for practicing without using a translator. It is also great to write a little everyday just to keep practicing, even if you didn’t have a very eventful day!

Keep up the good work,

Triss

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