art is a mestery mystery Art Is A Wonder

These days, I am studying in Chinese penmanship calligraphy these days. In my opinion, all kinds of art can flow together.  That is, break and reform.  When it is taken apartwas broken, it is remains great and fantastic, full of energe energy and imagination.  When it got gets reformed, it came to a peaks ,but,also,and slowly it fades faded,and would come to an end and comes to its end eventually.1

I am just correcting your syntax and grammar.  I don't understand what you are saying at all.  Maybe I don't understand art and all its bouquet but it makes no sense to me at all.  Maybe express it in Chinese so that I may peek into your mind.

You need to capitalize your "i"s.  No exception.  Leave a space after a comma and 2 spaces after a period but no spaces before them.