First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello All, my name is Yoga. I live in Cilegon, Indonesia. I want to be good at english, speaking, reading, writing and listening. I want to get a good TOEFL score. (or better: I want to do well on the TOEFL exam) Because i want to study overseas. I want to travel to other interesting places in the world. And Engllish as an international language is an important requirement..

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello All, my name is Yoga. I live in Cilegon, Indonesia. I want to be good in english, speaking, reading, writing and listening. I want to get good in TOEFL score. Because i want to study at overseas. I want to around to other interesting place in the world. And Engllish as an international language is an important requirement..

I'm not correcting, but below is my version looking at your note.

Hello All, my name is Yoga. I live in Cilegon, Indonesia. I want myself to be good in English, either it's speaking, reading, writing and listening. I want to get a good TOEFL score, because I want to study overseas. I want to travel to an interesting place around the world, and as an important requirement for International language, English is a must.