Mother's Love Today, I saw a mother was secretly leaning over the wall near the kindergarten on my way back. I followed her gaze, and found the children are having breakfast in the classroom. I realiz

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Mother's Love Today, I saw a mother was secretly leaning over the wall near the kindergarten on my way back. I followed her gaze, and found the children are having breakfast in the classroom. I realized that this mother is worried about her child, she is observating her child. There is a saying in Chinese " when you have a bady, then you know parent's love and hard". I couldn't agree more after my child was born.

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A Mother's Love

Today, I saw a mother was secretly leaning over the a wall near the kindergarten on my way back home. I followed her gaze, and found saw the children are having breakfast in the classroom. I realized that this mother was worried about her child, she is was observating her beloved child. There is a Chinese saying in Chinese " when you have a bady Upon becoming a parent, then you knoweth the parent's love and difficulties ahead hard". I am guessing you are referring to 天下父母心 I couldn't agree more after when my own comes into this world. child was is born. This is an example of using present tense for a future event.

Mother's Love

Today, I saw a mother who was secretly leaning over the wall near the kindergarten on my way back. I followed her gaze, and found saw the children are were having breakfast in the classroom. I realized that this mother is was worried about her child, she is was observating (wrong spelling) observing her child. There is a saying in Chinese " when you have a bady (wrong spelling) baby, then you will know a parent's love and hard (I don't understand what you want to say here)". I couldn't agree more after my child was born.

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I will try to explain the corrections:

1) "who" - you are missing a subject in the sentence

2) "saw", "were", "was", "was" - all of this happened earlier today - they are in the past

3) "will know a" - you are talking now about the future

Overall, you can get your idea across - good job! You just need to work on your tenses.

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