my love
Not long before,my favorite star Justin Bieber come to Hong Kong in China.
I am very excited,but i do not to see him beacause i am still studying in school
,i have not time .i feel sad.
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Hello, Yangliu. emm, my lit sis loves Justin Bieber too. hahaha..
Well, I'm trying to correct your notes. I notice yours is past time form. I see from adverb of time "not long before". So, it means you should use past time tense ( S + Verb 2 + O). here we go.
my love
Not long time before, my favorite star Justin Bieber came (come = came) to Hong Kong in China.
I am was very excited, but I do not to see did not see (you put "see" after not and please omit "to") him beacause I am was still studying in at school. I have had not time. I feel was sad.
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The only "bitch" I can see here is you Sunny.
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Don't worry about chinafan. He's just a bitter bitch, haha. He hates himself.
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^_^ because of you are a boy.
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The feeling he gives to the most people is terrible especially to the eyes and most important the ears. His music is bad you can see the internet comments about that everywhere. Only 13 year old girls like him.
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