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How I can get up early after reading "the miracle morning" After reading the book I wanted to try to get up at 6:00. on first days it was easy, I was full of enthusiasm and my wish was to be better than I can really be. Better than other people and do more. But after few weeks or may be even few days. I couldn't wake up. I got up and turned off the alarm clock and continued sleeping. Is it possible to have more motivation to get up earlier?

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How I can get up early after reading "The Miracle Morning" (a)

After reading the book, I wanted to try to get up at 6:00 a.m. (b) On the first day[s] it was easy, I was full of enthusiasm. My wish was to be better than I can really be, better than other people and do more. (c) But after few weeks or may[ ]be even a few days, I couldn't wake up.(d) I got up and turned off the alarm clock and continued sleeping.  I couldn't wake up. Is it possible to have more motivation to get up earlier?

a. Remember to capitalize the first letter of each word in a book title. 

b. A comma is recommended after any introductory prepositional phrase of more than four words. The abbreviation "a.m." stands for "ante meridian" or morning, "p.m." stands for post meridian or evening. Include one of these if your time is not 24 hour clock time.

c. This is referred to as a run-on sentence. It has ideas which could be separated or grouped better.

d. This introductory prepositional phrase should have a comma.

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After reading the book I wanted to try to get up at 6:00. on first days it was easy, I was full of enthusiasm and my wish was to be better than what I can really be. Better than other people and do more. But after a few weeks or maybe even a few days. I couldn't wake up. I got up and turned off the alarm clock and continued sleeping.
Is it possible to have more motivation to get up earlier?
 


Yes, but it depends upon you.


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