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Dillemma : Borrowing cars or taking public transpot The woman's problem is that she's forgotten to rent a van for her volunteer work. She's supposed to take several elementary kids to the zoo after school. She can borrow two cars and find a volunteer driver or take public transport. I prefer borrowing cars. Because private cars are safer for the kids and more convenient, despite the difficulty in borrowing cars and finding a volunteer. In the other hand, it's more difficult to supervise those kids on public transport and they could go missing at the stops, although it saves the trouble borrowing cars.

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The woman's problem is that she's forgotten to rent a van for her volunteer work. She's supposed to take several elementary kids to the zoo after school. She has the option of renting two cars can borrow two cars and find a volunteer driver or take the public transport. I prefer borrowing renting cars. Because as it is private cars are safer for the kids and more convenient, despite the difficulty in borrowing renting cars and finding a volunteer. In On the other hand, it's more difficult to supervise those kids children ('kids' is informal) on public transport and they could go missing at the stops, although it saves the trouble borrowing renting cars.

It's ideal to use 'renting' instead of 'borrowing'

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The woman's problem is that she's forgotten to rent a van for her volunteer work. She's supposed to take several elementary kids to the zoo after school. She can hire two cars and find a volunteer driver or take public transportation. I prefer hiring borrowing cars. Because private cars are safer for the kids and more convenient, despite the difficulty in borrowing cars of hiring them and finding a volunteer driver. In On the other hand, it's more difficult to supervise those kids on public transportation and they could go missing at the stops. although it saves the trouble borrowing cars though. .
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These are my humble suggestions

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