Please , check my note and give me some advice .

On the one hand, there are some advantages of studying in a foreign country. Firstly, students can gain higher academic qualifications when they study overseas. Therefore, they could have more opportunity to get an important position at a multinational corporations. Secondly, living and studying in the other countries can helped a student to learning a foreign language in the most effective way. Finally, attending university in a foreign country help the student to become will be more mature and independent.

On the other hand, studying abroad is not always nice . There are still some disadvantages of studying abroad. When studying in the another country some students may have a difficult to time adapting to the new environments and they may experience culture shock, their they might feel alone because everything is new and they have not are without their parents and friends nearby. There are also some different for approaches to teaching and learning in foreign countries. Therefore, students should create for themselves more self-study ['self-study,' here, would mean they were studying themselves., but I think you meant they should do more studying on their own]] more independent study and learning.

In conclusion, it seems that studying abroad is a good opportunity to help young learners better prepare for their future.