A lecture note : 'Groupthink' and it's negative effect
this is an answer I wrote to a TOFEL speaking task
In the task, a lecturer talks about his experience of 'Groupthink', basically, his proposal got rejected because the supporters changed sides when a few senior managers said no, and thus they had made a bad decision and that had caused the company profit of the year.
Below is my note.
'Groupthink' is a situation where group members tend to compromise with the group's consensus even if it's bad or irrational. Group members wanna be liked, just like the lecturer's coworker's wanting to maintain a good impression on his bosses. They also fear losing their jobs, just like the lecturer's coworker's not wanting to lose the chances of promotion by not acting like a team worker. Also they don't wanna be the only employee who's delaying the decision making process when the decision seems inevitable, just like the lecturer's giving up when the supporters had all changed sides. As a result, the team ended up with a bad decision and it cost the company profit of the year.
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A lecture note : 'Groupthink' and it's negative effect
this is an answer I wrote to a TOFEL speaking taskIn the task, a lecturer talks about his experience of with 'Groupthink'. Basically, his proposal got rejected because the supporters changed sides when a few senior managers said no, and thus as a result they had made a bad decision and that had caused cost the company profit for of the year.
Below is my note.
'Groupthink' is a situation where group members tend to compromise their own beliefs for with the group's consensus even if it's a bad or irrational idea. Group members wanna want to* be liked, just like the lecturer's coworkers wanting wanted to maintain a good impression on his bosses. They also fear losing their jobs, just like the lecturer's coworkers** not wanting to lose the chances of a promotion by not acting like a team worker/player. Also they don't want to be the only employee who's delaying the decision making process when the decision seems inevitable, just like the lecturer giving up when the supporters had all changed sides. As a result, the team ended up with a bad decision and it cost the company profit of the that year.
Nicely done!
* While it's very common to say "wanna" and "gonna" in conversation, I highly recommend writing out "want to" and "going to" in an entry like this.
**"lecturer's" needs an apostrophe because it is possessive of "coworkers". "Coworkers" does not need an apostrophe because it is not possessive of anything
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