Something has saved us
My daughter and I got run over by a car. The driver seemed to ignore the traffic light. It is said that people don’t aware of approaching danger and bumped without clear consciousness. So did I.
Fortunately, the car passed in front of us and stopped. We barely escaped from death.
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Something Saved Us
A car almost ran over my daughter and me! The driver apparently was distracted and completely ignored the traffic light. Oftentimes, people who are not aware of approaching danger somehow manage to avoid it without clearly being conscious of it. That was definitely us.
Fortunately, the car passed right in front of us, before stopping. We barely escaped from death!*
Hi, Ryoko. Good job! The changes that I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your ideas, and for ease of reading. Sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. J.
*Yes, both you and your daughter were very fortunate! That is precisely why I have always told my wife that even though she is in the crosswalk, and even though she has the right-of-way with the light in her favor, she still needs to watch for traffic rather than just having blind faith that the cars will stop. Anyway, I am glad that you both were safe!
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