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佳宜-Gladys
Share my life in Taiwan Hello everyone I want to share my secret base here. It's a house with Japanese style and the owner was a general.After he passed away,house keep the Japanese style and redecorated interior.Now it is a bookstore that is very comfortable let me want to always stay there.So I go there when I upset on something. 哈囉 大家好 我想跟大家分享我的秘密基地.它是一棟日式風格的房子,以前主人是一位將軍.在他過世之後,房子保留原本的日式風格並重新裝潢內部.現在它是一間書店,非常的舒服讓我想一直待在那裏.每當我對某些事感到沮喪的時候就會去那裏. "Thanks for correct my essay"

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Hello everyone I want to share my secret base here. It's a japanese style house and the owner was a general.After Since he passed away,the house has kept the Japanese style and a redecorated interior.Now it is a bookstore so comfortable that makes me always want to stay there.So I go there when something upsets me. 哈囉 大家好 我想跟大家分享我的秘密基地.它是一棟日式風格的房子,以前主人是一位將軍.在他過世之後,房子保留原本的日式風格並重新裝潢內部.現在它是一間書店,非常的舒服讓我想一直待在那裏.每當我對某些事感到沮喪的時候就會去那裏. "Thanks for correcting my essay"

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