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Old people With the economic development and the Family Planning policy(计划生育政策),leading to we country have rising life expentamyvand decling fertility rates,so China is gradually entering an aging society, many family have only one child(my parent only born a child ,it is me). we country and many familys need to consider how to take care of elderly, I think the problem is not only to ensure basic life, but also need paying attention to their mental health . the most important problem is lonely. Here are some ideas on how to deal with these issues. Firstly , we should cultivate elder hobbies, many elder have dedicated their lives to their childern , but due to the busy work of their daughter and son, therefore , they don't have time to accompany them. We should cultivate elder hobbies. such as playing chess , reading , growing flowers etc,Secondly when a family has elder over 70 years old , no matter they are working in a state-owned or private company , the companies should extraly give the employeer a few of days to accompany their parent.

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Old people

With the economic development and the Family Planning policy(计划生育政策),leading to have lead we our country to have a rising life expentamyv   expectancy and decling declining fertility rates,so China is gradually entering becoming an ageing society, many families have only one child(my parent only born a gave birth to one child ,it is me).
we Our country and many families need to consider how to take care of the elderly, I think the problem is not only to ensure basic life needs, but also needs paying to pay attention to their mental health . the most important problem is loneliness.
Here are some ideas on how to deal with these issues. Firstly , we should cultivate elder hobbies for the elderly, many of the elderly have dedicated their lives to their childern , but due to the busy work of their daughter and son, therefore , they don't have time to accompany /spend time with them.
We should cultivate elder hobbies for the elderly. such as playing chess , reading , growing flowers etc,Secondly when a family has an  elderly person over 70 years old , no matter whether they are working in a state-owned or private company , the companies should extraly ????(as an extra?) give the employeer employee a few of days off to accompany/visit their parent /relative.


Old people - is precise but can sound a little negative.

Elder (adjective) 'an elder brother'

Elder (noun) - technical/anthropological word to describe parts of society. It isn't normally used to talk about family relations.

Elderly (adjective) - more respectful way to refer to older people.

accompany - is used specifically to go to a place-eg accompany to the doctor More usual be with / spend time with/ visit.



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