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Into the wild I've just finished to watch the film. It is based on a true and fascinating story: Christopher McCandless' life. Christopher is a 23 year-old boy, born in a wealthy American family. He has good results at school but he doesn't feel peaceful in his life. He loves reading, he has a great culture and a strict moral code the involves him and the world around. Through famous writers' words, he shows his pain for his family. He wishes they didn't married but he also wants to live. As a result, we perceive that he has suffered a lot because of his parents. As well as this, he rejects the consumer society and he can't find happiness in his parents' presents. He doesn't want to live his parents' life, he doesn't look for money, fame or career. These strong feelings, together with his young impulsivity, make him become a traveler. He probably tries to find his place in the world. He seems to know who he is but he doesn't feel represented by his life. He wants to test his abilities through nature. He doesn't look for an identification, he wants to experience and accept nature's challenges. He struggles between escape of society and the research of something true. He's looking for new feelings and new awarnesses. He shows deep thinking and he's happy to help others. Through his favourite writers' books and nature he goes on searching.

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Into the Wild

I've just finished [to watch]/watching the film. It is based on a true and fascinating story: Christopher McCandless' life. Christopher is a 23 year-old boy, born in to a wealthy American family. He has good results at school but he [doesn't feel peaceful]/is not at peace in his life. He loves reading, he has a great/rich culture and a strict moral code that involves/applies to himself and the world around him. Through famous writers' words, he shows his pain for his family. He wishes they didn't hadn't married but he also wants to [live]/be alive. (As a result,) we perceive that he has suffered a lot because of his parents. As well as this, he rejects the consumer society and he can't find happiness in his parents' presents. He doesn't want to live his parents' life, he doesn't look for money, fame or career. These strong feelings, together with his young impulsivity, make him decide to become a traveler. He  [probably tries]/is probably trying to find his place in the world. He seems to know who he is but he doesn't feel [represented]/fulfilled by his life. He wants to test his abilities through nature. He doesn't look for an [identification]/identity, he wants to experience and accept nature's challenges. He struggles between escape [of]/from society and the [research of]/search for something true/genuine/authentic. He's looking for new feelings and a new awarenesses. He shows/demonstrates deep thinking and he's happy to help others. Through his favourite writers' books, and nature, he goes on searching.
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Yes, I think it can teach a lot. Chris did something many people would like to do and he tells it
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That's a sad film...

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