Man was born Free, 1and everywhere he is in chain. Born Free But Chained In Life.

I went to the 3rd ring2 of Beijing to see an old friend of mine in Beijing this afternoon. , and1 I saw an old women woman in the bus station on my return tripwhen coming back. The old lady was sitting in a wheelchair and recycling empty bottles as I was buying a bottled of drink from a shop. I guessed she did this for a living. that to make her life, So when I finished the drink as quick as I can and was done, I give gave the bottle to her.

However, I'm felt really sorry that I could not do anything else more to help her with her living condition, not even or make a better life for her.

I still remembered what my teacher had told me once when while I was still in colleage.  He said,

"No matter what others would may do, you guys should be trying to insist in what you believe in your dreams forever,,. Perhaps nearly every adult in everyone in China only wants a better job; and wants more money and wants a bigger house.  However, you guys shall never yeild yield to the reality give up your beliefs because you are a law school student.  You can Never give up your dream in of defending everyone's the rights to live a better life. And I hope, you all can still say you are an upholder of Justice."law man(is this right?) essentially."

Unfortunately, I couldn't help to do more.

Man was born free, and but everywhere else he is in chains.

Good line of thoughts like a future lawyer.  Everything begins as an ideal but reality of human nature debases it.  The US Justice has now denigrated to a cat fight of money.

1.  Don't use comma before conjunctions!  This is not even the Oxford comma.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Serial_comma

2.  What is the 3rd ring of Beijing.  Remember when you write something here, it is read by people all over the world.  So you need to explain what it is either as in a footnote or incorporate it in your writing.  If it proves cumbersome, leave it out since it offers no great value to the piece.  This is for good writing and has nothing to do with grammar etc.

3.  Who are you referring to?  The old woman? the readers? or your classmates?

Man was born free, and everywhere he is in chains.

I went to the 3rd ring of Beijing to see an old friend of mine this afternoon, and saw an old women in the bus station when coming back. The old lady was sitting in a wheelchair and recycling empty bottles as I was buying a bottle of drink from a shop. I guess she did that to make her life for a living, so I finished the drink as quick as I can and give gave the bottle to her.

However, I'm really sorry that I could not do anything else to help her with her living condition; I could not even make a better life for her.

I still remember what my teacher had told me when I was in colleage, he said, "No matter what others would do, you guys should be trying to insist in what you believe forever, perhaps nearly every adult in China only wants a better job and more money and a bigger house, however, you guys shall never yield to the reality because you are a law school student. you can You must never give up your dream of defending everyone's right to live a better life. And I hope, you can still say you are a law man(is this right?) essentially man of law."

Unfortunately, I couldn't help you more.

Man was born free, and yet everywhere he is in chains.

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Your writing is very good! There is a lot of cohesion of ideas, I'm sure many English speakers would understand your message. Only minor errors. 很棒！