Q&A Diary Day2
Could you please correct my English?
Q)If you could cry on anyone's shoulder, whose would it be?
Ans)
My wife is trustworthy for me. But I would not cry on her shoulder if possible.
Because I don't want to make her feel uncomfortable. And first of all, I should work a problem out on my own.
If the problem isn't solved by talking, I think I'd better not talk.
In such a case, it is better to change my mood for exercise like a jog.
Still, yet, furthermore, if I really want to complain, I will talk to my dog.
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Q&A Diary Day2
Could you please correct my English?Q)If you could cry on anyone's shoulder, whose would it be?
Ans)
I trust my wife, but I would not cry on her shoulder if possible because I don't want to make her feel uncomfortable. First of all, I should try to work a problem out on my own.
If the problem isn't solved by talking, I think I'd better not talk.
In such a case, it is better to change my mood by exercising, like going for a jog.
Still, yet, furthermore, (choose one, not all three) if I really want to complain, I would talk to my dog.
Good. It is generally seen as bad grammar to start a sentence with "but", "because" or "and".
In the last sentence you just need one linker. eg. Still, if I want to complain..., Yet, if I want to complain..., but not all three together.
The phrase "cry on someones shoulder" is more about being upset about something and looking for consolation rather than complaining.
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Q&A Diary Day2
Could you please correct my English?Q)If you could cry on anyone's shoulder, whose would it be?
Ans)
My wife is trustworthy for me. But I would not cry on her shoulder if possible.
Because I don't want to make her feel uncomfortable. And first of all, I should work a the problem out on my own.
If the problem isn't can't be solved by talking, I think I'd better not talk.
In such a case, it is better to change my mood for by exercising, like going for a jog.
Still, yet, furthermore,If after that, I still really wanted to complain, I'd will talk to my dog.
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