Where would you like to visit the most?
Could you correct my English to sound natural?
Last year I went to see the world heritage of Mont Saint Michel and the castle of the Loire region of France. I also like wine, of course, I enjoyed French wine.
So I'd like to enjoy great nature next time.
Currently, the place I most like to visit is Yosemite Park and Sequoia National Forest in the United States.
I have been to Yosemite park once before. However, because the stay at that time was only one day, I couldn't enjoy enough.
That's why I would like to stay there for several days and trail around falls and lakes next time. And I also want to see large metasequoia trees.
After enjoying nature, I want to visit some cities on the West Coast. Because I love Napa wines, I would love to enjoy wine with delicious seafood.
I wonder how many years go to the U.S. next. But I'm really looking forward to it.
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Could you correct my English to so that sounds natural?Last year I went to see the world heritage of Mont Saint Michel and the castle of the Loire region in of France. I also like wine, so of course, I enjoyed French wine.
So I'd like to enjoy the great nature next time.
Currently, At the moment, the place I most would like to visit most is Yosemite Park and Sequoia National Forest in the United States.
I have been to Yosemite park once before. However, because the my stay at that time was only lasted one day, I couldn't enjoy it enough.
That's why I would like to stay there for several days and trail around the falls and lakes next time. And I also want to see the large metasequoia trees.
After enjoying nature, I want to visit some cities on the West Coast. Because I love Napa wines, I would love to enjoy wine with and delicious seafood.
I wonder how many years will pass before I get to go to the U.S. again next. But I'm really looking forward to it.
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Yes, the price of souvenirs was generally expensive like other tourist spots. However, there were lots of lovely shops, I was also surprised that seabirds were friendly and they would not fly away even if people approached. I really enjoyed it.
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Did you like the Mont Saint Michel? Went there one time some years ago. Found it was very crowded and expensive. However that's a beautiful place.
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