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Afternoon when I comeback to home after work, I was sleepy, so I slept a little while of time, and I had a odd dream which was about a girl who had two children, one girl and one boy, they were in her house but at the same time they weren't, so afterwards she was downing the stairs because was like a fire, so she took them and then a I woke up.
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Afternoon, when I come back home after work; I was sleepy. So I took a little nap, and I had an odd dream about a women who had two children. There was one girl and one boy. They were in her house but at the same time they weren't. So afterwards she was going down the stairs because there was a fire. So she took them and then I woke up.Hi, interesting dream you had! The first thing I would like the add you had no periods so it made the whole thing a run-on sentence. Second, the thing I highlighted confused me at first because I thought you were talking about the little girl instead of the women, and also if they weren't in the women house then was it a stranger house? Lastly, the last sentence you could probably just say... The women took the kids to make it clear.
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