Brexit
The Brexit is today one of the most compelling issues which attract attention people around Europe. It seems obvious that not only British citizens will be affected but other nations of Europe too. Last days all headlines covered information about it. For an impartial observer, it can be a little odd situation when own cabinet refuses to back for own Prime Minister. What is more, it turned out that whole two years work to establish a deal with EU has been wasted by refusing approval by Parlament. The situation is very complicated and nobody knows what will happen in near future. The government doesn't have time to devise any reliable solution and citizens await in strain. Any agreement looms on the horizon so we don't know what expect. Currently, probably most people would wish to stay at EU but the decision made two years ago by the nation during the referendum can't be ignored so impasse leads to quarrel and confrontation in Parlament and in the street. Hopefully, the problem will be resolved and the decision made by the Parlament will be good for all British and European people.
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Brexit
Brexit is today one of the most compelling issues which attracts the attention of people around Europe. It seems obvious that not only British citizens will be affected but other nations of Europe too. In recent days all headlines covered (information about) it. For an impartial observer, it can be a little odd situation when her own cabinet refuses to back their Prime Minister. What is more, it turned out that whole two years of work to establish a deal with the EU has been wasted by Parliament refusing its approval. The situation is very complicated and nobody knows what will happen in near future. The government doesn't have time to devise any reliable solution, and citizens await in a state of fear and uncertainty. Any agreement looms on the horizon so we don't know what expect. Currently, probably most people would wish to stay in the EU but the decision made two years ago by the nation during the referendum can't be ignored so impasse leads to quarrel and confrontation in Parliament and in the streets. Hopefully, the problem will be resolved and the decision made by the Parliament will be good for all British and European people.1
Brexit
The Brexit is today one of the most compelling issues which attracts attention of people around Europe. It seems obvious that not only British citizens will be affected but other nations of Europe too. In the Last few days all the headlines covered information about it. For an impartial observer, it can seems to be a little odd situation when own the cabinet refuses to back for its own Prime Minister. What is more, it turned out that two whole two years work to establish a deal with EU has been wasted by Parliament refusing its approval by Parlament. The situation is very complicated and nobody knows what will happen in the near future. The government doesn't have time to devise any reliable solution and citizens await in strain*. Any agreement looms on the horizon so we don't know what expect. Currently, probably most people would wish to stay in the EU but the decision made two years ago by the nation during the referendum can't be ignored so the impasse leads to quarrels and confrontation in Parliament and in the street. Hopefully, the problem will be resolved and the decision made by Parliament will be good for all British and European people.*strain isn't quite right here, as it is written it needs an adverb. Or you could change the sentence to something like 'citizens find the wait a strain'. I hope that the corrections are helpful and make sense.
I hope you are right and it can be resolved for the good of all!
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Brexit
Today, one of the most compelling issues, which has attracted the attention of people around Europe, is Brexit. It seems obvious that it not only will it affect British citizens, but also will affect citizens from other European nations, too. The last few days have seen newspapers full of headlines and articles offering information about it.
To an impartial observer, it seems to be a rather odd situation when a Prime Minister’s own cabinet refuses to back her agenda. What is more, it seemingly turns out that the whole past two years’ work to establish a deal with the EU appears wasted by Parliament’s refusal to approve it. The situation is both very complicated and intricate, and nobody knows what will happen in near future.
The current British government simply does not have the time to devise any realistic solution and that leaves its citizens to await in uncertainty. Truly, any number of possible agreements loom on the horizon, so we honestly do not know what to expect. Currently, most people would probably wish to stay within the EU, but the decision to leave made two years ago by national referendum, must be acted upon, and this impasse has led to countless quarrels and confrontations both in Parliament and in the street.
I hope that the problem will be resolved soon, and whatever Parliament’s final decision, it will somehow be good not only for Great Britain, but for Europe as well.*
Hi, Gregren. Good job! The changes that I have made were to allow your sentences to sound better to my native ears, to clarify your ideas, and for ease of reading. I hope that this helps you. J.
*From an American viewpoint, this situation seems like a huge mess with no easy resolution. Of course, we have our own political problems to deal with right now! It will be interesting to see which one not only ends sooner, but also is resolved more satisfactorily.
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