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Do you know it? Do you know that our brain needs a 23 minutes for concentration? For anything. If you want to learn something, you need to focus for 23 minutes on your task. If you are solving a problem with your partner, you must think about this problem for 23 minutes. Put your phone down and don't browse the social media. Just concentrate. And your brain will focus and try to solve the task. Try it! Please correct my mistakes!

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Do you know it?

Do you know that our brain needs a 23 minutes for concentration? For anything. If you want to learn something, you need take a to focus during for 23 minutes on your task. If you solve the problem with your partner, you must think about this problem during for 23 minutes. Put down your phone and don't browse a social media. Just concentrate, and your brain will focus and solve the task. Try it!

Please correct my mistakes!

Here you go, Daria. Please feel free to ask me if you have any questions =)

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Do you know it?

Do you know that our brain needs a 23 minutes for concentrate?

Correction: Did you know that your brain needs 23 minutes to concentrate?

If you learn something, you need take a focus during 23 minutes on your task. If you solve the problem with your partner, you must think about this problem during 23 minutes.

Correction: If you are trying to learn something or solve a problem, you need to focus on it for 23 minutes.

(I don't think it is necessary to write "your partner". Hopefully, this omission doesn't change the meaning of what you want to say.)

Put your phone, don't browse a social media. Just concentrate. 

Correction: Put your phone down and don't browse social media; just concentrate. 

And your brain will focus and solve the task.Try it!

Correction: Your brain will focus and try to solve the task. Try it!

Please correct my mistakes!

No correction needed.


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@EgorS Thank you for very useful comment! :) Can I ask? Did you born in Canada or move there?
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Do you know that out brain needs "at least" 23 minutes "to" (no "for") concentrate? For anything. If "you are learning something", (I think, since we are continuously learning something, structuring this sentence in continuous tense might work best) you need "to fully" (no "a") focus during "these" 23 minutes "of" you task. If you "are solving a problem with your partner" (still on the continuous present), you must think about this problem "for" (no "during") 23 minutes. Pit your phone "down/away". Don't browse the social media. And your brain will focus and solve this task. Try it! Totally agree))

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