Introduction for volunteer work. I would need some corrections.
Hello. I'm Zsolt from Hungary. I'm traveling around South East Asia in 2019. I try to keep my expenses as low as possible whilist I'm traveling. I've worked in Hungary, England and Denmark as a restaurant manager, waiter, kitchen porter, cook... Also I can do almost any handwork. I'm looking for volunteer work exchange for accomodation and some food. I love animals and nature. Backpacking and traveling around South East Asia (and later around the World) is on my bucketlist. Dear Host, I hope you are willing to help me my dreams come true :)
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Introduction for volunteer(ing) work. I would need some corrections.
Hello. I'm Zsolt from Hungary. I'm traveling around South East Asia in 2019. I try to keep my expenses as low as possible whilist (whilst) I'm traveling. I've (I) worked in Hungary, England and Denmark as a: restaurant manager, waiter, kitchen porter, cook... Also, I can do almost any handwork. I'm looking for volunteer(ing) work in exchange for accomodation(accommodation) and some food. I love animals and nature. Backpacking and traveling around South East Asia (and later around the World) is on my bucket list. Dear Host, I hope you are willing to help me make my dreams come true :) ___________________________________________________________________________________________
Hi Zsolt, just like to let you know that:
volunteer is the noun and Volunteering is the action.
There's no need for I've as worked already means that you been there.
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Introduction for volunteer work. I would need like some corrections.
Dear Host,
Hello. I'm Zsolt from Hungary. I'm will be traveling around Southeast Asia in 2019. I try to keep my expenses as low as possible while I'm traveling. I've worked in Hungary, England, (<--Optional comma) and Denmark as a restaurant manager, waiter, kitchen porter, and cook, Also and I also can do almost any handwork. I'm looking for volunteer work exchange opportunities that provide for accommodations and some food. I love animals and nature. Backpacking and traveling around Southeast Asia (and later around the world) is on my bucket list. Dear Host, I hope you are willing to help me make my dreams come true :)
Happy travels, Zsolt! =)
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